[Report This]Date: November 08 2021 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: SIMON SAYS... KISS ME, BECK!
Wow, just wow!! This story has been exceedingly fun so far, I’ve tremendously enjoyed every chapter! It’s rare to see a gentle story that’s this high quality, and I’m loving every bit of it! I love it when the tiny is confident and has an actual personality, and Simon and Beck are so cute together. Vore isn’t even my thing really, but you’ve definitely been pulling it off well here. I’m really curious to see how their relationship develops from here, especially after Simon has completed his little expedition into her stomach! There’s so much potential here for a cute and interesting relationship, and I can’t wait to see where you go with it. Congrats on the great start, please keep it up! Take care~
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Hi there Pluto! Thanks so much for the excellent review. You've really hit the nail on the head with your comments: I wanted both Simon and Beck to be fully fleshed-out characters, so that any potential romance between them could seem genuine, even if it happened very quickly. The funny thing is, I originally envisioned Beck as the more confident one, intending for there to be a scene where she had to race against the clock to describe her desires to Simon before Milla returned... but when I started writing Simon's character for the first time, he turned out to be far more worldly and confident and the dynamic of the tiny being the braver of the two struck me as very novel... so that's how it ended up in the finished draft.
Thanks for reading - there should be more very soon!