[Report This]Date: February 15 2022 8:43 PM Title: Visitation
Sorry for this review after another of the same chapter. I would not want to be considered spam because that is not the intention but I wanted to clarify something. Now that I read it for the fourth time I realize something.
I think a meeting between Jenna and Lexi would be awkward because now I think I understand what the author meant when he said "knowing exactly what the young Enforcer had sitting in a glass cage in her bedroom just a few houses down." If my hypothesis is correct, considering the ending of Omega: Hostage, I would say that she is Lexi's mother, Alma. Although in the end Jenna swallows it, I don't know if she died because of it. Maybe that's why Jenna didn't go to the visit at the Cade house. Oh wow, I hope I'm not spoiling (as always) but I think now I can see why Jenna didn't go to the party.
Wow, incredible, it is very subtle how the situation is described and without using so many words. It is simply magnificent.
Author's Response: Jenna will definitely be making an appearance in this story and her absence from the party will be lightly addressed.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2022 8:11 PM Title: Visitation
God damnit, I almost missed two chapters in a row ! What a dunce I am !
Another stellar chapter (well, chapters). A little surprised we aren't seeing more of Bridget since I kind of expected her to have a bigger role since she had a whole chapter to herself as soon as the second one, but I can honestly live with that because this story is just too well written to be mad at anything.
Like, each Omega got a real depth just from the way they stood in comparison to Lexi. And that last bit about Bridget breaking down because of what Lexi said, which was meant to be something positive ? I'am crying, I ain't lying about it !
I can't wait to see the two of them reunited, and also I'm pretty sure that they have more than sisterly love - at least Bridget has. I alreayd kind of felt that way in the original story, that she acted more like a scorned lover than anything else, but here? That's cementing it for me, that's my headcanon from now on/
Author's Response: It definitely is mainly Lexi on her own in this earlier part of the story, but Bridget will still have a major role to come. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2022 8:03 PM Title: Visitation
Another outstanding chapter!
Can’t wait to see how things will develop going forward based on who was (and wasn’t) featured in this chapter, especially given the intriguing tags discussed in earlier reviews
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. Some of those tags won't get used until much later in the story, but there will be a lot of variety.
[Report This]Date: February 08 2022 4:12 PM Title: Visitation
Oh wow How many omegas. There are some that I know, and others I don't think so. I don't remember that Alexis Bandera. I guess she is a new character in this story. Benett seems to me that he is the son of the teacher of the history of Omega: Keeper. Dawn I remember her from Omega: Hostage and Claire is always with her imposing attitude from her but at the same time empathic from her. Although she did say something in her speech from She to Lexi that makes me wonder. How will the Omegas make sure that what happened to Lexi doesn't happen again? I remember a reviewer at Inerithance saying the same thing. A beta could do the same to an Alpha and if nobody proves his innocence of him he will be punished just like Lexi. But anyway, I guess you could count on Kayla in those cases. Let's see how the story unfolds.
Another thing that I would like to see at some point in the story is a meeting between Jenna and Lexi hahahaha. That would be nice. Kayla in a conversation with Abby told her that Jenna was the closest to Fire of all the Omegas of this generation. She enjoys her work more than she should and does it with all enthusiasm. But seeing firsthand that injustice can go both ways must have caused something in her mind to contain that sinister Fire. Or maybe she didn't do it at all.
The other most worrying thing about what is happening is Bridget's situation. If Lexi doesn't rescue her from herself she'll collapse from madness. The Alpha has to be strong, this will not be an easy mission.
In short, great story. When I read it I imagine the scenes in my mind as if I were a spectator who empathizes with the characters and therefore feels their emotions. For me it is a true work of art. Let's see how it ends. I honestly don't know how this story doesn't have more reviews or comments because it's a very good story and those comments help motivate the author to continue it.
However, Jack, I assure you that even if it is not enough, I will always be a faithful reader of this literary work.
Author's Response: Because a lot of this story is in Lexi's perspective, we won't actually see what Claire was referring to, but it's safe to say something more active was done than just being extra vigilant. Jenna will be making an appearance in this story. And Bridget is definitely in need now.