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Reviewer: Uschught Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2022 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

This was a really erotic and well written story! If you ever decide to make a part 3, I would love to see more action between Jon and Julie at home 

Reviewer: Xemastop10list Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2022 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

Great start to this story, can’t wait to see where you take it.

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Date: March 14 2022 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

This is gold my friend. You are a magician with words, the way you depict the situation! how the conversation lads to a misunderstanding! the mother slowly being corrupted to this newfound pleasure! I am hyped and so glad I found this incredibly well written story! Thank you much for writing this <3
I'd would have liked more backstory, something like a prologue explaining their life and relationships before the shrinking and the progress towards becoming a stress ball, but hey its still incredibly good!



Author's Response:

Haha, well said- and no problem, I aim to make enjoyable content. I'm glad to hear it. There could have been a bit of backstory, but as this was a commission request for the original idea, I didn't want to dally too much before getting into the "action" as it were. It seems the overall goal of the scenario still gets through well enough though so I'm pleased with that!

Reviewer: cozmos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2022 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

Damn this is like everything I look for in a story. great work. Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you've enjoyed so far!

Reviewer: MCcrapito Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

mis una buena historia me encantó la relación de madre eh hijo y como juegan con los diálogos y posibilidades en especial la parte donde se preguntan en qué parte del cuerpo de la madre meterán al pequeño hijo

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