Date: October 14 2021 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Just a quick little thing,[...]"
- That's kinda hard to believe (but maybe that's because I am so bad at poety and lyric).
However I like the story, the rhyming fits the "well-meaning gnomes" theme of the Minish quite well. Especially as we know from The Minish Cap itself that Cobblery is in fact something they do.
It's short sure, but it isn't longer than it needs to be.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2021 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I actually like the rhyming. However I see why you put it in a short story because I'm sure it will get tiring. It does make it feel like a christmas story. Love the more wholesome/gentler scenario you made up for the characters. Will you make a sequel to this story in the future? Maybe you can write something about when Malon does find out about them?
Author's Response:
Writing it proved surprisingly tricky haha, but glad you like it. I was aiming for that sort of bedtime story, fairy tale quality. Dunno if I'd do a sequel, but hey anything is possible.