Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2010 10:43 AM Title: Journal Entry Number 11

Whew! You twisted the plot so much, with this chapter, you got my head spinning.

I now hope chapter 12 is just as prompt as this one was!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2009 8:43 AM Title: Journal Entry 9

Whew! When you resume story-telling, after a long interlude, you don't do it halfway. Bravo!

Just one question: was this the (ahem!) climax of the story?

Author's Response: no. it really had no point to it. i just felt like doing a little piece where the characters play around abit. it was like a small side story. the actual plot will continue in the next entry.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2009 10:21 PM Title: Journal entry number 8

Whew! For a moment, I thought the cliff-hanger would be the old "they-kidnap-the-princess-while-the-hero-is-away" cliche'.

Thanks for avoiding that...and updating the story, in general.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2009 8:43 AM Title: journal entry number six

WOW! I can't believe I read these first six chapters in one sitting. But, I did! They were that riveting.

And, for good reason. Not many fanfic authors use the "personal correspondence" style of 1st-person narration that Bram Stoker used when he wrote the novel DRACULA. Maybe they think they won't pull it off as well as he did.

But, so far, you've proven the exception to the rule. Bravo!

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2009 9:47 PM Title: First Entry

Pretty interesting read so far, please keep going!!

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2009 12:13 AM Title: second entry

So far its very fun to read, i enjoy reading it and look forward to reading more.