Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3: Saturday, June 14th, 2008

Not so much a sexual or B/D, S/m fetish story as a pretty cool sci-fi story.

Would be great if Megan Weiss, Margaret Weiss, and Holly Krieger each end up swallowing Gator, Slackjaw, and Scrapper; or doing something else kinky with them.

Sometimes it's hard to follow the story line as you go from "Megan and Holly" to "the three of them" {presumably Chris is the third person}.  This was done in the second chapter at the crash site.

Will Megan get her shrunken city?  Will Holly ever swallow somebody, such as Vito, as she suggested to Megan?

Overall, a nice change of pace and well worth reading.

Author's Response:

Thanks for catching that mistake, originally Megan had two friends, Molly and Holly but I changed it to just one but didn't edit thoroughly. I want this to have mainstream appeal, not just a fetish story.