Date: September 29 2021 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
"[...], albeit a very detailed and comprehensive one that seemed to go on for many, many yards around." - Very solid choice to use yards due to their origin.
Not that there were many buildings left standing anyways; most of them had been destroyed as the city was picked up, and many more were still being destroyed as Marnie held them, crumbling from the subtle movements of her hands, movements so minute that they didn't even register for her. - Thanks for this attention to detail.
"“Welcome to your new life, you worthless little specks. I hope you enjoy being my little worshippers because that's what you're going to be doing for the rest of your lives. You can start right away by worshipping the smell of my feet.”" - I wonder how the members of Team Yell would react to this treatment..
I reckon Sonia ventured into one of these Worlds and was thus snuffed out by Gloria and Marnie. I gotta say though. This is probably the story with the by far most damage I've ever read at least five Universes destroyed... Hardly any story can compare even those with Genies or Deities.