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Reviewer: fosmat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2021 10:04 AM Title: Homecoming

Loved her attitude to the servants, excited to see more.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! c:

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29 2021 10:06 PM Title: Homecoming

Really nice, I love the setting!

Looking foward for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

So glad you like it so far! Next chapter should be out soon :D

Reviewer: SirFarty Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2021 9:37 AM Title: Homecoming

I love it! You have a link to what she looks like?



Author's Response:

Unfortunately I don't. She is my own creation. However, her body will be described in much higher detail next chapter!

Reviewer: Mr Decadent Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2021 1:56 AM Title: Homecoming

Hey! Im Lurker, the guy who commisioned this story over on Discord. This was an asolutely amazing read, really high quality writing. Everything I wanted, and more!



Author's Response:

Really happy you like it! Put a good amount of thought into this one, and can't wait to release the next two chapters! Hopefully everybody else enjoys it as much as you did ^_^

Reviewer: tinyguy33 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2021 11:00 PM Title: Homecoming

Great start to what should be a very engrossing read! A good amount of characterization, and of course the unaware deaths were very well done. Certainly left me wanting more, I hope the next chapters arrive soon!!

I especially liked the spit scene, not a common method. Especially unaware! 



Author's Response:

Spit stuff is something I've felt has always been underused! Definitly one of my favorite ways to think about killing a tiny. Drowing in spit is undoubtedly towards the top of the list as pathetic ways to go out! The next two chapters are signficantly longer, but I felt like this was a good length for an introduction chapter! Really glad your liking it so far <3

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