Date: September 24 2022 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 39: Talking to Myself
This chapter sounded like something you really enjoyed writing. Like an experimental idea you really wanted to see how it would work. I thought it was quite interesting and something that completely took me by surprise. I can imagine those two sides of his brain putting some boxing gloves on and pommeling their opinions into each other. Looking forward to what Kazuya will do next. Whether it be succumbing to what ID wants him to do and ‘unleash the beast’ or if he goes with superego’s idea and decides to continue being chivalrous and maybe even taking it upon himself to have a chat with the old man
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Wanted to experiment with the idea of personifying the struggle of Kazuya's conscience. The inspiration came largely from the character interaction between the Narrator and Tyler Durden in "Fight Club," with Kazuya's Id basically serving as Tyler with him trying to get Superego to embrace the harem and stop being so restrained and chivalrous about the whole thing. Anyways, glad that it amused you.