Date: May 10 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16: First Group Lunch
Hello, my fellow readers, my Esteemed Author.
Is it me, or is our Esteemed Author accelerating his pace?
Yes, Chiffon definitely speed-ate just so she could snuggle. That or she Illusioned Turned it into a different dimension. Regardless of the choice, the answer, Kazuya, is yes.
So, now we have Kaho in the spotlight, and Chiffon getting some time in. Chiffon is Chiffon, and that playfulness certainly helps to separate her from the fact that she is, unless something has changed in-universe, the most powerful and dangerous Pandora at that table. “The Smiling Monster” indeed. Kaho’s innocence and cuteness is also pretty good, though I don’t have much to say about her in particular.
The first time that I’ve seen the Pandoras act in a militaristic fashion in the story since up to this point it has been nothing but romance. Bit jarring, but it's to be expected given that they are Super Soldiers at a military academy. Though Ingrid is certainly the one I would expect to pull rank from what I remember of her canon personality.
Something tells me Miyabi is about to make an appearance, but who would the other female and the man be? Could this potentially be a normal-sized woman, since if it was two Pandoras, things would have most likely gone rather loud from the first few seconds? The cliff-hanger draws me in further, especially now that we’re going to get an OC character. I can only wonder who the OC will be.
Good Day.
Author's Response:
Hello once more. Here's my response.
With regards to Kaho, from what I've seen in the Freezing anime, Kaho seemed to have something of a soft spot for Kazuya in my opinion. So the notion of breaking the ice with him and having a tender moment with him was an amusing concept to entertain, though she might feel nervous being both a first-year student and in the presence of Pandoras who are senior in rank to her.
As for Chiffon, given that she's the top-ranked Pandora at West Genetics and Student Council President, it's not too farfetched in my opinion for her to pull rank and exploit an opening when it presents itself. The idea of Chiffon having a relationship that goes from friendly to romantic with regards to Kazuya is another hypothetical that I personally consider plausible and very entertaining.
About Miyabi, I actually do have a planned appearance for her in the next chapter, though perhaps not what you're expecting. I don't want to give away too many surprises, but she'll get some screen with our main character and his lovely ladies, that much is sure.
As for the OC, its probably the one that makes me the most nervous in this whole thing. Inserting a brand new character gives a lot of room for possibility, but it's a gamble in my opinion. Hopefully, this person I've created will be amusing in one way or another. As things stand right now, this OC is going to be mainly a side character, popping in and out throughout this fanfiction.
Glad you're enjoying this so far, and I hope to see more of your fanfiction in the future as well. Until then...