[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
Scott's not entirely wrong. I still strongly suspect that second wormhole experiment was sabotaged by Jennifer in some way. Precisely because she liked the new power dynamic in her and Jerry's relationship.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was. It's depicted unclearly in the chapter because it's from Jerry's POV but Jen reached in and pulled him out once he returned to mouse size. She prefers the power dynamic with him being small, but she is also terrified of the machine possibly hurting Jerry and wanted to pull him out as quickly as possible.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
So happy you continued this. For a second there, I thought you had finished. Didn’t want to say anything, but as an ending felt rushed with too many loose ends. Looking back now, I like those chapters even more, since it’s clear you were building to something that’s finally starting to show. Great work, can’t wait for the next round of chapters!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I know writing quantity has slowed down for this story, it's not a reflection of me losing interest. I'm intent on finishing it. Because the story is nearing the end and I wanted to slow down to consider plot threads and different possible ways of concluding it. I'm also mentally tossing around the idea of a third story or spin-off, so I don't want to rush and conclude the story in a way which accidentally wraps up things which might be explored later.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2022 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 70: Blast from the Past
Loved this chapter so much. It's like Scott was a piece of Jerry's mind just yelling at him. He's definitely about to be thinking about what he said for a while.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! I guess it was exploring how Scott and Jerry used to be similar but have changed since they last saw each other.