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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 65: After Party Part 4: Paradise

"Houston, the Eagle has returned to the nest."

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2022 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 65: After Party Part 4: Paradise

What a cliffhanger! I wonder if Jen knows that Jerry was kidnapped and not just cheating on her. I'm hoping Jerry can actually explain everything to her before he suffers even more because he's just been getting raped for like 10 chapters. You've got me hooked on the plot and I couldn't stop reading until I got caught up. I'm just hoping Jen and Jerry make it to the end of the story still intact.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! It's going to be addressed in an upcoming chapter, so I don't want to say much. But, Jen is a fairly perceptive person, and reads Jerry like a book, so either way, she wouldn't be deceived for too long.

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2022 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 65: After Party Part 4: Paradise

That was thrilling to say the least. Still at the edge of my seat

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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