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Reviewer: Iunno Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 37: A Day on the Bay Part 2: Splashdown

I noticed whenever they have a small disagreement about him staying small, Jen immediately moves to something sexual to digress.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, and for noticing that. Yes it's not a coincidence. It's one way to quickly put an end to a disagreement. But it's also her way of proving to Jerry his worth at current size, with action rather than words.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2021 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 37: A Day on the Bay Part 2: Splashdown

OOPS!  Forgot to rate the last five chapters.  Ten points, apiece.



Author's Response:

Thanks Carycomic!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 37: A Day on the Bay Part 2: Splashdown

I can only presume the obsessed fan was hauled off by the cops while Jerry was occupied.  Or, should I say, occupying (Jen's intestines)? 

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