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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2022 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 27: Vet Consultation


I'm also surprised that Jen doesn't get jealous at how hands on the vet is with Jerry.



Author's Response: She sees it as a necessary evil, since it's more important that she gets confirmation Jerry is not sick or injured. And if the vet signs off on his wellbeing, Jen figures she can keep playing with him the way she likes.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2022 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 27: Vet Consultation

The chapters with the vet are my favorites. I hope you'll consider giving her a spinoff with her own tiny man or tiny woman.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, HectorVanDyne! I don't really have anything bigger planned for the vet. So far she's worked in small, intense bursts and I'm reluctant to tinker with the dynamic she has with Jerry.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2021 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 27: Vet Consultation

The most plausible emo scene, yet.  That's precisely why I try to keep my own short fuse on an even shorter leash.  To prevent myself from saying something I might NOT regret!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I imagine Jerry and Jennifer's relationship in 'real life' is a little more frictive than I portray it, they are both a little stubborn and when they butt heads it's a case of an immoveable object meeting an unstoppable force. They fight and make up, and so on. I thought if I showed too much of that it would be obnoxious and make both characters detestable, so it was a choice between portraying the characters as they 'are' or cleaning up the ugly stuff a little, and implying it (rather than actually showing it) like with smashed glass on the ground. I don't think people read these stories to read about people fighting, but some conflict is necessary, so it's a balance.

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