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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2021 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13: Proposal

Don't do it, Jerry! Stay a swinging single!! Otherwise...

... "You'll be SAW-rhee!"

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 13: Proposal

Thought I left a review on this, but I guess I forgot to hit submit lol. Definitely the hottest entry yet and easily one of my favorite ongoing stories right now. Now I know it may be a bit redundant, but boy would I love another kidnapping plotline. Perhaps a spoiled celebrity he meets through that producer? Also, what's stuart been up to? I certainly would enjoy the irony if his relationship didn't workout and he was left with the vet like some sort of pet. I'd reckon she'd be more than happy to give him his forever home, hehe.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I did consider some kind of kidnap plotline but didn't write it because I thought it was the same thing over again. The kidnapper is still in the story, and it's about the point I'm up to writing right now, so I am thinking of expanding it again; in fact I've started to write some of this. It's allowing a resolution that I really like. So maybe there will be something like this upcoming somewhere.  As for Stuart, he was resized before the epilogue. I didn't plan for him to have a bigger role beyond the first story.

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