Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2021 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: Talking to Thunder

Glad to see you back.  I'm also glad to see some chapters at Jerry at his new size.  I know its probably not going to be permanent but the descriptions of his interactions put a whole new perspective on everything and you have described it awesomely.  I especially love the Jerry stuck to the fingertip part.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy the new size. It was a fun challenge to write, conveying how diminutive and helpless Jerry's perspective is.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 3: Talking to Thunder

Well, at least Katie didn't accidentally man-handle him.*

*Yet!

Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2021 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: Talking to Thunder

this story is amazing. You have illuminated the difference in size and power between Jerry and the gigantic party-goers with such startling and erotic clarity, especially between Jerry and Jennifer. He is a miniscule nothing for her lust. Wow, well done. In my opinion, this is minuss-like territory you've thus far explored with aplomb.

 

Please continue. And when I see a story so well-written with the BUTT tag, good lord, my heart's a thumping.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, teradonk!