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Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2021 4:18 AM Title: Part I

This story started very well.  The suspence, the emotion, the mystery.  I'm looking forward to this.  Going by the tags, I'm hoping Vivian will be in good hands.

Reviewer: littless Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2021 12:33 AM Title: Part I

First chapter was a little long (like I should talk) but good set up for what's coming. Can't wait.

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