Date: September 14 2021 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Most of the time I hate when the little guy is being mistreated, but in this case I'll make an acception. Here we have a guy who was an Asshole at full size, and everything that's going on how he had coming. I like that. Karma is a Bitch.
Yeah, this will definetly be a story about him being put in his place and learning that karma is a giant bitch. Thanks for the review
Date: September 12 2021 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading more and would love for some unaware scenes with Eileen. Do you plan on writing any descriptive scenes about his visual and olfactory experiences? I hope that he gets a taste of karma, and that we meet some more characters as the story moves along.
Thanks! And I'll try to be as descriptive as possible. But I don't consider myself a great writer. If you have any examples or suggestions of things I should add, feel free to email me at email@example.com