Date: August 27 2022 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Submissive giantess is the rarest and the hottest thing in this fetish.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2021 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter was hilarious and quirky XD Like Sofia being submissive to someone, even though they're a tiny.
She really is ditzy XD "He hasn't asked to come out again yet"......seriously.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thanks! i've seen people want submissive giants and i figured this story could be one to implement that
[Report This]Date: October 19 2021 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm. Sofia is quite the character. Based on what I've seen from here, Im not even sure why Claire agreed to train her or why Jeremy agreed to this. Sofia seems like the person to kill Jeremy by "accident" and just say "oops" and shrug it off. Idk, this situation feels off to me.
From a viewer's perpspective, this is very entertaining. Clearly, some crazy thing is about to happen and both Claire and Jeremy gotta save Jeremy from Sofia somehow. That's my prediction. It's literally a recipe for disaster, but I also can't wait to see it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 17 2021 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow, now things are heating up once again for Jeremy.
I love Sofia's fitzy attitude and the visuals of her as a giantess were great. (and the part where she stomped her feel near him, and later went barefoot)
Can't wait to see how this plays out, as well as the content Sofia will engage in.
Author's Response:
gets a lot more interesting than the first half, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2021 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Amazing chapter!
Kinda cool that they both enjoyed it. The race game was kinda fun since clearly Claire had the advantage and Jeremy didn't realize it.
Loved the dildo scene too. I was expecting him to go all the way in near the end. I thought his hesitation meant that Claire would insert him all the way in slowly rather than only halfway.
However, going in halfway did lead to that amazing sex scene. That wouldn't have happened inside of her.
The release of her cheeks to squeeze him at the end was awesome. It's like her ass just devoured his orgasm as he came.
Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2021 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
XD I love Claire
(not just her sexy actions, but her attitude too)
This chapter was another hot one, especially the butt stuff and having Jeremy be a living dildo.
(Any chance of some post-brothel romance?)
Author's Response:
unfortunately i dont think the story is gonna go that far, but she returns in the sequel. but yes you're right, i like her personality too :) nice to write gentle and friendlier stuff for once!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2021 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Chapter 4 is simply amazing!
It's so erotic and I just love how Claire teases Jeremy before they get down to business.
The first 3 chapters felt like it was one big tease, nothing really stood out to me. (Until this one). Claire seemed to be leading Jeremy down this path and it feels like we reached the point where things get really interesting. I mean, there's even a great cliffhanger.
Even some of the some subtle teases were great. The removal of her panties was perfect! She gave him a view from the front and then the back, showcasing her butt as she took her underwear off. Not only that, but then she dropped it on him! Amazing! I bet he could smell her scent from it, but it was probably overwhelmed from her actual pussy hovering over him. You described that scene so vividly that it was easy to picture it in my head.
I also like the dialogue and playful banter between the two characters. Too many sex scenes in various stories are written in third person these days, so it's nice to hear what they have to say while they are in the moment.
If there was one critique to mention, it would be to space out your paragraphs a bit so there aren't too many blocks of text. Otherwise, it was fun to read this chapter!
Lastly, I love the ending where Jeremy is sinking into Claire's vagina. If I were a tiny and this was my fate, I would be in heaven. While I'm sure this isn't the end, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
i think its just different people liking different things, which is totally fine. chapter 1 was definitely setup, but chapter 2 was all about boobs, chapter 3 was all about feet and a lil mouthplay, chapter 4 is down under and chapter 5 will be ass. like in chapter 3, she literally strokes his dick with her toes; if ur into feet idk how much more explicit or sexual u can get than literally fucking them lmao
glad u like the dialogue tho too, i agree with u. people arent just silent animals grunting away when they have sex irl lmao. tthere is talking and foreplay and complimenting and if you know what youre doing COMMUNICATING. so yeah glad someone appreciated that.
thank you for your critique on the paragraphs. in general i was taught in english classes growing up that you always start a new paragraph when a new person is speaking, but if they keep talking then keep it in the same paragraph unless it grows too long. i know i have long sentences, but really the paragraphs are only a few sentences long. and i want it to resemble more what books look like, when i read other stories i think like "this is a good story for sure but i dont remember gillian flynn pressing enter this many times" lol. but i'll take it into account, havent read a book in a few months so i'll compare and contrast again.
thanks for the feedback and thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2021 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm. I thought this was marked "completed". That is why I tought it was a preview but I stand corrected. My bad then, especially if you're going to release more chapters.
Again, I have no problems with paid-only, only that people be honest about it. I completely misunderstood. I'm upping my score.
Author's Response:
no it was marked completed, i just had done that because, well, it was completed. so if someone really wanted to they could read the full thing ahead of time. i'd go back to my amazon analogy where they have prime movies and rent-only movies together. theyre both completed, but one is free and one u can only rent until it. i talked with some other writers and readers from the site and they didnt see the issue
but ultimately since it was ruffling a bunch of feathers i figured i'd just change it, i still have the same view on the matter i just dont want to keep replying to people lmao
Date: September 20 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, I did miss your other stories. I was just miffed that you stopped where you did when you should have marked this a preview of paid content. Like I said, I might have paid to continue but not when this is done so poorly.
I have no problems with patreon or youtube or even deviantart or any other paid content. I have patreon myself and subscribe to an artist or two. It just seems dishonest when you weren't up front about what you were doing here. It would have been so much better for you to put this in the description.
Cheers.
Author's Response:
maybe it was the way i worded it but every single story i post here will eventually be released, theyre weekly releases. there are a couple patreon exclusives but i've never published a "preview" of them here (like "here's chapter 1 and 2 but the rest will never be released!" and most of my exclusive stuff ive never even mentioned, people only know about them from visiting the page and finding out for themselves.
so yeah i didnt say in the description that this is a preview of paid content because i dont see the story as paid content since itll eventually be free. like the other person said, even if i didnt have a patreon, i wouldnt want to publish all the chapters at once, i'd stagger them. so i dont see the difference. its like if u paid an TV executive to watch an entire season of a show before it gets released weekly thru broadcast tv (free channels). its a free show, its broadcast... just that that one person could see it first. but its not a paid show like cable or streaming.
in fact its also bc i want to advertise as little as possible, have less "sub to me!" in story descriptions. every new chapter i release i delete the advertisement from the previous chapter, and theres no advertisement in the beginning. and i do those because its irrelevant, if they dont like the story enough to get to the most recent chapter anyways then mentioning my patreon would be pointless since they clearly wouldnt care to read it sooner.
but thanks for your response :) sorry i got a lil sassy with my last reply i'd just woken up
[Report This]Date: September 20 2021 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've honestly never seen such a constant stream of bad takes, you got rather unlucky with this one Jess. Only read the first part so far, pretty good.
Also to those whining about it being marked as complete and its released weekly, there are people that completely finish stories and still only release them weekly a chapter at a time to get more eyes on it than just dumping it all in one go. Its a completely valid thing. Ya'll gotta calm down. Its fuckin' Giantessworld, not the Library of Congress.
Author's Response:
i didnt even know about that lol. i dont think i'd have the patience to just sit on a story with NOBODY reading it lmao like i'd have to show SOMEONE
[Report This]Date: September 20 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Omg I love this. I've always felt that boob scenes are under-utilised in Gts stuff
Author's Response:
gonna have a lil bit of everything :) or at least all the main categories
[Report This]Date: September 20 2021 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sorry, you can say what you want but using this venue for the sole purpose to lure people to your Patreon page qualifies as SPAM in my opinion. You should have said something to that effect in the description and then it wouldn't be SPAM, but the way you did this was in poor taste.
It's too bad, because I see merit in this and might have paid to see your work, but I won't be supporting these tactics.
Author's Response:
lmao did u miss the part where i've published 350,000 words worth of stories to this website (and counting)? i guess 700 pages worth of material is spam, huh?
youtubers have patreon accounts. they still publish lots of free videos, but the patreon allows them to make money.
musicians have patreon accounts. they still publish lots of free music, but the patreon allows them to make money.
artists have patreon accounts. they still publish lots of free drawings, but the patreon allows them to make money.
coders have patreon accounts. they still publish lots of free programs, but the patreon allows them to make money.
and some people dont have patreon accounts at all, the only way to experience their stuff is to buy it, there's never any free samples! 😱
what's so evil about me (and all the other writers here who have patreons (which is most of the most active authors here, hm wonder why)) wanting to make money from something i like to do? thats how the world works dude, and how the website works too. sorry that after all these years i had to be the one to break it to you
Date: September 20 2021 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Completed: Yes
Just because genre tags ARE selected ahead of time doesn't mean that you get to redifine their usage. If it has not ended, it's not complete.
Wish this site had better moderation tbh.
Author's Response:
but it HAS ended.
you can watch tv shows before theyre complete, or watch ones that are, you can play games before theyre complete, or play ones that are. there are patreon stories on this site that you can pay to read that arent complete, and ones that are.
this site does have moderation, they recently updated the featured list, they cleared the spam attacks from a few weeks ago, they added new categories, sometimes they delete stories. they just dont see what im doing as a problem (or they dont give a shit).
BUT its not my intention to apparently piss off readers of this site, i've been doing this for a year and a dozen stories and nobody's mentioned ever cared but for some reason this story's brought out the people who are bothered, so i'll change it i guess.
Date: September 07 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I dont care wrong theme tags but when i search for completed stories i expect those stories be finished in a way that the story reached a an end even if with a cliffhanger of some sort but not just stopping as if futher chapters follow but they dont because one has to purchase them elsewhere.
Would you dont mind if on tv is a movie announced for 2 hours and when you watch it after 15 minute its over with a line "now go buy it in the next store"?
Author's Response:
"Would you dont mind if on tv is a movie announced for 2 hours and when you watch it after 15 minute its over with a line "now go buy it in the next store"?"
Well my family doesn't have cable or satellite TV we just use streaming services. So to use that as a comparison: if I go to Amazon or something to watch a movie, and I go to "released films" (aka films that are "complete" just like looking for stories are "complete"), I don't get angry when some of the stuff is only available by renting. I don't feel lied to, because the movie IS released. It IS complete and I CAN watch it right then and there if I want to. Or, I can wait a few weeks or something for it to be free on streaming.
Date: September 07 2021 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well this is not deviant art and when you mark a story as complete here it says one can read the whole story here now and not that one has to pay for the full story elsewhere or wait till you you mercfull give it snackwise to us.
Author's Response:
so what if it's not deviant art? you're not in charge of this place lmao. the guy who runs this place has literally talked with me about doing a commission before, i think he's more than aware of how i (and other patreon creators) operate.
it's more than normal for writers here, whether they're newbies or active posters, to select the tags for their story that they plan to write about. like they'll put something in the "boobs" category from day 1, even tho they might not write about that until a few chapters in. when i was writing my two main stories, i had them marked as incomplete because i didnt know if i'd finish them or decide to give up writing for whatever reason. puny professor is still marked incomplete because it never got a proper end and just stops abruptly. but this story, i already know that it'll be complete eventually because it's fully written. also i dont wanna have to go back and re-edit all the categories so i just check everything off ahead of time since i know it'll be gotten to.
so i look at it like the category tags or similar things and have it marked as complete because it is complete. some people support content creators (i've literally had people ask me how to donate before i had a patreon set up just as a thanks), so for those people, they can finish reading the story from beginning to end right now. and if someone doesnt want to pay for it they dont have to, which I'm 100% ok with and completely understanding of bc its not like i buy subscriptions for all the artists or writers i like either lol.
also... just such a weird thing to complain about lmao. some people tag their stories with the wrong categories, some people don't care about spelling or grammar mistakes, some people publish like a dozen 500 word stories in a row so it fills up the "most recent" section... but it's me marking a story as complete (which it is) instead of incomplete that has you riled up?
so yeah, this is just how i do things and clearly the site staff don't have a problem with it. if you ever run this site one day then you can feel free to ban me or whatever, but until then i'm just gonna keep doing things as they make sense to me, and if you dont like it then ignoring my stories is not that hard.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2021 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
So you post the story here with one chapter marked as finished to then lure people on patriot to pay for more after you tricked them with false informations?
This is not porn hub where people can upload teasers as advertisement.
You are the worst.
Author's Response:
"after i tricked them with false information" LMAOOOO ok dude. you're right im a super evil schemey person.
99.9% of professional authors, you have to pay to buy their stories. most artists or comic-makers on deviantart or other sites, you have to pay to see their full collection and they never publicly release some artwork. but im bad bc i want to turn a hobby into a side job to support myself, and even then i still publish my stories weekly for free, they're just not all at once. aw, poor lil simpson3k, they have to wait until october to read the full thing instead of reading it all in september like they want to :(
ever notice why a lot of the most active writers in this community are the ones who have patreons? its because when there's a direct correlation between writing and making money, people are incentivized to write more. its a win for the creators who can support themselves a little easier, and its a win for the community because the creator's output increases and everyone gets to read more stuff. you wouldnt even have the privilege to get to shit talk me here if it wasn't for the person who commissioned this story.
in summary: stay mad bitch 😎
[Report This]Date: September 06 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
So are the remaining chapters going to be uploaded her weekly? or are they only going to be available via patreon?
I really like the setup and establishment here.
Author's Response:
yeah i release stuff weekly :) 95% of what i write is eventually free cuz i like entertaining people here too!