I feel like personally, tiffany is going to get wasted next chapter and humiliate her brother even more sexually which could be anything from a nonstop booby ride of hell jiggling him around the party to an incestuous makeout session against Scott's will if he keeps annoying her while she's having fun she could do something like that just to shut him up if she's a more party drunk. and last but not least if he really pisses her off she could just rape him again and again until he passes out if he does something stupid like I am your older brother and the man and you will show me some respect showing her insecurities of how she always wanted to be in charge for once taking it in an ultimate power swap firmly showing that she is in charge and how powerless she is as she pleasures her self to his tiny body until he collapses using all of her parts at least once to show she will do whatever the hell she wants to him and he will deal with it. 

Love part where Scott ate his own sister's spit. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job as always

I must thank you for not letting it overtly blunt that Sarah likes Scott from the get go. Some stories just drop a character and her first line to the shrunk guy is ‘I wat you inside me’ -_-

The way you portrayed, Sarah strucked me as a good friend to balance Tiffany’s inconsequential behavior, while being a bit clumsy and wanting to party herself. Which means, Scott is obviously more safe in her hands, but not completely out of danger.

Had you made this chapter too focussed on Sarah and Scott, it could have ruined her introduction. You were carefull to focus on Sarah while not forgetting she existis in relation to Tiffany’s role in the story, giving space for each personality to shine.

I also liked you established a time frame for the story. Tiffany has called and already schedulled Scott regrowth in one week. This makes everything more real and worthy the time, it reasures us that we will be able to see the conclusion of Scott and Tiffany adventure at some point.

Last but not least, I loved the beach scenes, all of them. They highlight a lot. First the size diferences from Scott perspective; secondly the attention the girls pay to Scott as well as how immature they really are, choosing to wear “scandalous bikinis”... to play sand castle and giant monster with Scott.

I feel you've once again built a lot of good material and I can’t wait to see how each relationship will evolve along this week the three spend together.

Thanks for sharing your story with us!

Really amazing story,  Ithink any of the 3 scenarios sounds potentially interesting.  love the teasing so far
think a cruel ex would be neat

Loving the story so far.  So curious if she already did call the help line to initiate the data restore process?  Or is she gonna "forget" to do that?  Also if he is 1/4 inch tall does the shrinking process make him more durable or is he fully vulnerable at that size?  As such an abusive brother it would be funny if he ended up being given to someone else or lost all together by the end.  Or maybe she says that's what happens and keeps him as her toy.

Seen a vote option for a male giant antagonist.  Wonder if he was to be brought in maybe a cock vore scene cause I don't think I've seen one with a male shrinky before.  But what ever you do with your story will probably be an amazing read from what I've seen so far.  Can't wait for more.

Nice. I hope for more mouth play that ends up accidentally swallowed. Either that or getting placed in the vagina right before she had sex with an unaware guy.

Interesting first chapter. I like the dynamic between his sister and him and I can't wait to see where else he ends up. Maybe he ends up on her thong string on her  ass ;).

Looking forward to more :)

It's a great start! Can't wait to see what happens next!

This looks interesting.  I hope we get to see her in situations her brother talks about protecting her from but she can't rely on him anymore.

Lol they are so cute. Will there be more?