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Reviewer: lovergiantess7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2023 8:16 AM Title: A Balanced Breakfast

Love this story, great detail. I spotted a few typos in there (spelled "mucus"). Like how she just cracks on with life after all of that :-), are you writing more like this? I would love to know how she came to get these shrunken people, perhaps a prequel? hint, hint?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and the five stars! And also thanks for pointing out that typo, I will fix it as soon as possible.

If you check out my profile, you will find a lot more stories like these. In fact, all of my stories are set in the same universe and have a lot of recurring characters, Birgit being one of them! :-) This stories actually makes some allusions to the previous story featuring her, called "Drive-through".

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2022 3:29 PM Title: A Balanced Breakfast

I’ve read that you’re contemplating on changing the size of the minuscule ones.  Imaginably, a range from 1.5 cm to 2 cm would allow the diners to swallow one effectively.

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