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Reviewer: Rude Zude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2021 8:31 PM Title: Shrink Ray Malfunction

Absolutely love this story! Short, but enough build up, and even culminates in one of the sexiest displays of power difference I've read in a good while. You captured the tone that I typically strive for in most stories!

Really hope we get to see more from you some time! Really enjoyed this one!

Reviewer: Mr Decadent Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 8:26 PM Title: Shrink Ray Malfunction


I really liked this story. I like how the sheer difference in size was conveyed. like how even faint whispers to Yumiko are like the sounds of a natural disaster to the tiny person because their simply too small to understand them.


I think the ending was great as well. It's an interesting idea to have the giantess accidentally crush their friend while trying to help them. What seems to be a gentle touch to her was an absolute death sentence to the other girl. emphasizes the vast difference in power and scale.


I hope you write more in the future :)

Reviewer: vicgiantessadmirer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 8:14 PM Title: Shrink Ray Malfunction

Really, bobby? Anyways, I love the writing style.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 12:02 PM Title: Shrink Ray Malfunction

Excellent start, and I love the scale! I really hope Yukimo (nickname Yuki?) "grows" to love the machine as she shrinks people...then maybe whole towns! It would even be fun if she shrank a cruise ship and made it a bath toy! And hopefully something like a cruise ship wouldn't crush so easily. Finally, it would be fun if the police found out what she was doing and to get out of trouble she just grew herself a thousand feet tall and had fun with a whole city! You already reference godzilla, and she would make godzilla look like a toy! If the shrink ray can restore size...maybe it can grow thinks? Really hoping for a lot of great bare footplay content. Great start!

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