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Reviewer: matrix2590117 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2021 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3 collared and claimed

please continue this story i love it
u can use some ideas like the global world of women who enslaved the men 

and give us differnt cultures of different treatmeant for this slaves

women can use them as foot cusion inside their shoes licking and massage thier feet

women can use them as toilet paper and farting absorber

many ideas u can use 



Author's Response:

indeed, and I'm def open to anyone who wants to write stories within this setting and explore those different things and situations. I plan on a few other stories set in this world as well but would love to see other additions as well


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2021 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 3 collared and claimed

I love the start to this story. The opening scene with the news ladies giggling about their tiny precious news anchor sets the scene perfectly. It basically shows us what this world is all about. Every woman with a pet watching this news all know what's going on, but the remaining men probably have no idea which makes this news scene that much more amazing. 

The slow shrink and development was also amazing. It takes some good writing to engage the audience without even adding much sexy content, and you did it for me with just dialogue. Now I could only imagine how awesome it would be when things turn sexual.

Claudia is fantastic. The way she teases her boss every step of the way was great. We could also see her slowly taking over his life. First his office, then his identity and now his body. 

I would love to hear what the other ladies are doing with their pets. We saw one lady keep one trapped against her butt. Claudia teased with her foot. Now I'm curious what other methods of uses she could think of.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: MeGo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 collared and claimed

Nice one keep going and add more shrink men

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