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Reviewer: amerdism Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2023 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

*sigh* I was hoping for a happy ending where Heather got back to her family, oh well, good story either way.

Reviewer: ThaPhoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2022 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2022 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

This was such a great story and I hate that it's ending. Are you thinking about going back to the Sorority stories any time soon or maybe sequels to other stories? I love your writing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2022 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

So this is it?

Poor Hot Mom, she just wanted to be appreciated and did all she could and still ends up dead due to Em's lust etc. I do wonder what actually became of Zoey though since she was the reason she ran to the Lex/Em in the first place.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, she just kept having shrinking spurts and the longer she lived under Emily the more casual cruelness she witnessed by the two girls and their friends so maybe this ending was inevitable. Maybe Siggy could've saved her if she started taking pity on her instead of mostly being smug about her permanence. If Emily started letting let her handle and sharing a bed with little Hot Mom, I bet she could've buttered up to Emily and Lexie to let her keep Heather as her own little playmate/pet.

This is a story I'd really like to see one "What if?" chapter for. Do you think you could make one chapter for if Heather stayed at her home to meet her husband and Zoe or if she somehow ended up back in Zoe's hands? And show us if you would've done with the characters in Heather's family? Would Zoe and her dad be loving and doting towards Heather, keeping her safe at home and caring for her whether or not she was a 18" shrinkie or a 1" shrinkie? Or if you planned on making one or both of them just as cruel towards Heather as typical society or have the same gradual disinterest or apathy towards Heather's safety or treatment as a big pet shrinkie or a a tiny morsel/disposable one?

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 26

Also from this bits Clues scattered about I figure she was doomed either way.  I think she was dead women unless she happened upon a caring giant but that didn’t happen . So yea at least she isn’t in pain and suffering anymore.


Thankyou for the story.  Now I need to watch something cute and fluffy.  Look forward to your next work.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2022 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Poor hot mom. That’s a bad way to go. But at least she won’t suffer anymore.

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