I tend to be pretty neutral towards mouthplay, but this was incredible. I've read many food tf and entrapment stories but this is by far the best for me. The small things you do, such as including the vibrations caused by simply walking adds so much and makes your writing immersive and leaves an impression.

I wrote this review without checking who the author is first, but wow. It's Franchise Writer, no wonder this story is so good. 

Thoguht this was an absolutely wonderful story! Shame it doesn't have more reviews; even not familiar with the game I definitely found it to be very alluring. Very much enjoyed the power differences and perceived turnabout.