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Reviewer: aamiller1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2021 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Worst of Companions

This is an interesting story with a unique perspective. I like learning about how bigger this world is outide of Vandan and Elgon. Sylvie is definitely more daring and mischievous than Belena, and Roth is certainly no push over. I think it's an interesting dynamic to read, see how their animosity may change or grow. Nice work on the first two chapters. I look forward to reding onward.



Author's Response:

Acrophite here. Thanks for the review! I think this story is going to be much more whimsical and will take the series where it hasn't before, purely because Sylvie is such a different character compared to the others. You get more of that dominating side from her, and Roth might just conflict with that. 

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Worst of Companions

Can it be that Sylvie fell in love with Roth?



Author's Response:

Oh definitely not. She's actually quite annoyed with him. But I think she feels bad about how she treated him, maybe a bit. Guess we will see what happens to these two!

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