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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Pirates at bay

King Radigan reminds me of the Master of Lake-town in The Hobbit. A fat and decadent ruler who cares more about gold than his own people. I'm sure Sylvie will put him in his place, as she did for the pirates.



Author's Response:

I definitely based him off the Master of Lake-Town completely. Sylvie will definitely knock some sense into him ;)

Reviewer: wordUP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2022 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

Yes! I'm so excited that you're continuing this series with its intriguing plot and character depth. No exaggeration, the Vandan series is my hands down favorite of the genre and I always scan the Most Recent for Malaka & Acrophite posts. I hope that you get enjoyment from creating this mythical world, as we certainly appreciate your writing!



Author's Response:

Acrophite here. Thank you so so much for this review and the rating! Creating this world probably gives me as much joy as you all have reading it. These characters are such a big part of my life at this point and having the privilege to write new stories for them is an honor. Thanks your for support to both Malaka and I, it really does motivate us when we're getting burnt out from writing!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2022 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 3: Journey to Eris

Always nice to see another Vandan story. I'm enjoying the animosity between Sylvie and Roth. I also loved her easily overpowering the pirates and teasingly threatening to eat them. And then doing the same to Roth! Sylvie seems to have a more mischievous nature than her sister.



Author's Response:

Definitely! She really enjoys messing with people who deserve to be messed with.

Reviewer: aamiller1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2022 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

Hey Acrophite. I hope things are going well. I just wanted to share with you an idea I had about creating a Vandan centered podcast. I asked Malaka on Deviant Art to see if he’d like to be a guest, and I wanted to ask you if you’d be game for it too. Sorry I had to ask you through here, but I could find other ways to contact you. Thanks.



Author's Response:

I'd love that! HMU on deviantart here: https://www.deviantart.com/acrophite1

Reviewer: aamiller1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2021 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Worst of Companions

This is an interesting story with a unique perspective. I like learning about how bigger this world is outide of Vandan and Elgon. Sylvie is definitely more daring and mischievous than Belena, and Roth is certainly no push over. I think it's an interesting dynamic to read, see how their animosity may change or grow. Nice work on the first two chapters. I look forward to reding onward.



Author's Response:

Acrophite here. Thanks for the review! I think this story is going to be much more whimsical and will take the series where it hasn't before, purely because Sylvie is such a different character compared to the others. You get more of that dominating side from her, and Roth might just conflict with that. 

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2021 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Worst of Companions

Can it be that Sylvie fell in love with Roth?



Author's Response:

Oh definitely not. She's actually quite annoyed with him. But I think she feels bad about how she treated him, maybe a bit. Guess we will see what happens to these two!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

The Chronicle of Vandan series are always nice to read.

 



Author's Response:

Acrophite here. Wow! I'm honored to get a review from you, I've loved your Mysterious Island story. You ever need a co-author sometime hit me up XD. Malaka can vouch. But hey the review is highly appreciated as well as the rating. 

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2021 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

Cool :)

Reviewer: gentle bbw Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

It's nice that vandan is being written on and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. And as far as the growth potion is concerned, it could be used to make even more women and girls grow while the men and boys stay small.



Author's Response:

The potion will be explained next chapter, but it is not able to make living things grow, only plants or plant based things, so bread is in too. 

Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

Thank you again for continuing this series for me, I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.



Author's Response:

I'm excited too. You know me, just making it up as I go along, so I might be surprised by the story too 

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure Continues

I had previously considered giant-sized food being used to end starvation, hopefully the Vandanian's will use it as such. Also, other giant-sized materials in general could probably end poverty in Vandan and the surrounding area.



Author's Response:

Acrophite here. Rismarck, the large town outside of the castle, is quite well off thanks to living in the area, so it would be interesting to see this idea brought forth in regions where people may not even know the giants exist, such as where we are in this story. It's something I'll keep in mind too!

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