Reviewer: GTS33 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

One of my favorite things to read is Brob-Lilli interaction. Such mundane, careless actions on the part of the Brobs always has cataclysmic effects on the Lillis. I just love it.

The fantasy-lover in me enjoys the power dynamic. The way Nell throws around her weight, especially with her body, is just amazing. You've captured the "superiority" idea really well. She's really just some woman, but to them she's akin to a goddess. That kind of power is crazy to think about.

But the realist in me tends to feel really anxious when reading stories like this. I always imagine myself as a Lilli in these worlds, so naturally I can relate to Jeanine's feelings. Heck, it almost makes me glad that our world doesn't have giant-sized people.

I'm really enjoying this story and what it's trying to show about their world. My only complaint is that the chapters come out too slowly. I guess that's not really a complaint, huh? Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

It's something I'm trying to work on, the rate at which they come out. I don't want to get too personal about it but life hasn't been too kind lately, and it's really sapping my willpower sometimes. But the reviews and kind comments keep me motivated, so thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved this chapter!!

Great seeing Jeanine have her fantasy's (and liked the old horror movie-esque film she was watching with the Brobdingagian woman, really funny and also hot to think about)

And Jeanine's fantasy's at the end there with Nell and John were really well written.

Can't wait to read more.