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Reviewer: PYoga Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say this story is a banger, love the Brodi/Gulli/Lilli size dynamic and couples emphasis. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: fosmat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2021 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man, every chapter of this story is so good. I love how you write the feeling of size and power the giant's feel, it really adds to it.

Also I love Nell, that little opening section of the last chapter was great.

I know it's hard to be consistent with uploads, so good luck with that and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words, I do my best to communicate the gravity and weight. No fun having big people if they don't feel big. ;p

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now if only there were a way for Jeanine to reverse it like in her fantasy...



Author's Response:

Unfortunately I don't think Lilliputian technology has come that far along yet sadly.

But who knows, maybe Jeanine will revisit this fantasy of hers again in the future. If she survives the next meeting of course.

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

YES! Chapter 2! I'm thrilled you didn't give up! 

Once again another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Your writing is supurb! Loved the lewd stuff. Keep it coming! 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it; I was trying to let you know I put chapter 2 up but the site's private message system doesn't appear functional. I even left a review mentioning it on the story you posted, haha.

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2021 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

My dude I'm begging you to continue this. It's such a good setup. Iv'e been checking for updates daily



Author's Response:

It's coming! I haven't 100% decided where to take the next chapter yet, but I think about it in the shower and whenever I day dream though. I haven't forgotten about it. :)

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Strong start! Great descriptions, nice pace, enough detail. I really love it. This could turn into something rivalling Kosmita's work.

Some double words (e.g. I'll drag my finger over ... and lick you off my finger) and some tiny errors (e.g. She quickly scooped her up materials), but they don't distract much.

Awesome story!



Author's Response:

Ha, thank you, yeah I noticed upon rereading it that I had a few errors and repeating words, but it was too late to change it (as far as I know you can't edit a chapter once it's already up), but it's something I have to keep in mind moving forward. Write drunk, proofread sober. ;P

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutly LOVE this set up. I can not wait to see what Chapter 2 will bring.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well damm this start is amazing so far o.o 

 

Good job man!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing start to the story. Can't wait to see more. I'm a big fan of Nell and her big breasts already haha

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