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Reviewer: PYoga Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say this story is a banger, love the Brodi/Gulli/Lilli size dynamic and couples emphasis. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: fosmat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2021 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man, every chapter of this story is so good. I love how you write the feeling of size and power the giant's feel, it really adds to it.

Also I love Nell, that little opening section of the last chapter was great.

I know it's hard to be consistent with uploads, so good luck with that and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :) 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words, I do my best to communicate the gravity and weight. No fun having big people if they don't feel big. ;p

Reviewer: GTS33 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2021 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

One of my favorite things to read is Brob-Lilli interaction. Such mundane, careless actions on the part of the Brobs always has cataclysmic effects on the Lillis. I just love it.

The fantasy-lover in me enjoys the power dynamic. The way Nell throws around her weight, especially with her body, is just amazing. You've captured the "superiority" idea really well. She's really just some woman, but to them she's akin to a goddess. That kind of power is crazy to think about.

But the realist in me tends to feel really anxious when reading stories like this. I always imagine myself as a Lilli in these worlds, so naturally I can relate to Jeanine's feelings. Heck, it almost makes me glad that our world doesn't have giant-sized people.

I'm really enjoying this story and what it's trying to show about their world. My only complaint is that the chapters come out too slowly. I guess that's not really a complaint, huh? Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

It's something I'm trying to work on, the rate at which they come out. I don't want to get too personal about it but life hasn't been too kind lately, and it's really sapping my willpower sometimes. But the reviews and kind comments keep me motivated, so thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 2.5

Another fantastic chapter! I absolutely loved this one, it's your best one yet! Glad to see you continuing! 

Author's Response:

It's been a long time coming, but I wanted to do something special for the holiday. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2021 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now if only there were a way for Jeanine to reverse it like in her fantasy...

Author's Response:

Unfortunately I don't think Lilliputian technology has come that far along yet sadly.

But who knows, maybe Jeanine will revisit this fantasy of hers again in the future. If she survives the next meeting of course.

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

YES! Chapter 2! I'm thrilled you didn't give up! 

Once again another great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Your writing is supurb! Loved the lewd stuff. Keep it coming! 

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it; I was trying to let you know I put chapter 2 up but the site's private message system doesn't appear functional. I even left a review mentioning it on the story you posted, haha.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

wow 2 great chapters. love your work. love the cruel jeanine

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved this chapter!!

Great seeing Jeanine have her fantasy's (and liked the old horror movie-esque film she was watching with the Brobdingagian woman, really funny and also hot to think about)

And Jeanine's fantasy's at the end there with Nell and John were really well written.

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2021 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

My dude I'm begging you to continue this. It's such a good setup. Iv'e been checking for updates daily

Author's Response:

It's coming! I haven't 100% decided where to take the next chapter yet, but I think about it in the shower and whenever I day dream though. I haven't forgotten about it. :)

Reviewer: squashed123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Strong start! Great descriptions, nice pace, enough detail. I really love it. This could turn into something rivalling Kosmita's work.

Some double words (e.g. I'll drag my finger over ... and lick you off my finger) and some tiny errors (e.g. She quickly scooped her up materials), but they don't distract much.

Awesome story!

Author's Response:

Ha, thank you, yeah I noticed upon rereading it that I had a few errors and repeating words, but it was too late to change it (as far as I know you can't edit a chapter once it's already up), but it's something I have to keep in mind moving forward. Write drunk, proofread sober. ;P

Reviewer: WorldsBiggestOOPSfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I absolutly LOVE this set up. I can not wait to see what Chapter 2 will bring.

Reviewer: MadHatter Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well damm this start is amazing so far o.o 


Good job man!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2021 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing start to the story. Can't wait to see more. I'm a big fan of Nell and her big breasts already haha

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