[Report This]Date: July 13 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, absolutely fascinating. Disregard my earlier review comment about 2" and greater, that was one hot vore scene. Absolutely cruel and heartless, I love it! You described it great, made it absolutely believable, and I had no doubts that Shelby was capaple of swallowing that woman whole even at 6"
Now I'm curious, did the celebrities die in real life AFTER they went through the television? Or did they die in real life after dying in Shelby's stomach in their shrunken form? It wasn't quite clear, but either way this is giving me DEATH NOTE vibes and I fucking love it.
You speed along pretty quickly, the ending makes me think we're about to see a time jump, so I'm curious to see which direction this will head in.
I've read enough to give you a rating now, at least for the last two chapters, this is a 5/5 for me it is extremely creative and well written (minus some irregular sentence structures but nothing that is too distracting)
Great job, I look forward to my future free time to read more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm so glad you like it and took the time to comment! There's a little bit more detail on how the deaths work as you progress, you'll have to wait and see, and I hope you enjoy the rest!