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Reviewer: Doc Occ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2021 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the way you get straight to the action without too much needless story. I was half hoping that when she put the guy in her purse he would activate the shrinking device on her leaving them both shrunk.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I like to think that there's nothing but action for someone thrown into a giant unforgiving world. You have to be quick if you want to survive. The little guy probably would have, if he were fast enough. You snooze you lose (possibly your life).

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good stuff



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kilroy25 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm a raver myself and I am very excited to see this story continue.

Very accurate scenarios too. Definitely love the converses too! 

Love it so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Whenever I'm on the dance floor, I can't help but visualize what it would like to be tiny. I thought it time to convert that visualization to print. I also wonder how long I would survive (not very long). ;)

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