Date: July 20 2021 1:18 AM Title: The Strip Club '4'
This story is amazing!
It's funny how you mentioned vaginal insertion was why it became popular but you don't even list that as one of the fetishes you write about in your bio. So to read a story about insertion from you Frizzle, is a surprise to me.
You upload and update stories often, and most of them aren't my cup of tea. However, this one falls right in the ball park of my own interests, so I'm glad to hear that this story was popular back in the day.
Just read all 4 chapters, easy to binge when they are so interesting. I found Skye and Ginger to be both awesome. I love Skye's gentle teasing and I also like Ginger's sadistic torture. That was hot.
I think my dream giantess would be the combination of Skye and Ginger, someone who is sadistic, flirty and very sexual. The fact that Ginger kept Kenny in her ass all night was amazing!
I love it when authors have characters that tease ideas here and there. In the second chapter where Skye and Kenny were teasing each other in the beginning, I love the ideas that Skye was talking about. The way she says she wants to cram Kenny deep inside. I mean damn, that's sexy.
I also like how Skye in the beginning was thinking about kidnapping Kenny. In another reality, I kinda wanted to see that happen and have Kenny protest being kidnapped by Skye. Then you had Ginger kidnap him which was sexy, but also similar.
One thing I found too convenient was the random woman telling Skye where Kenny was. It felt too random for me lol, but I understand you wanted to get Skye to know that Ginger had Kenny. Haha. I thought maybe Skye could notice Ginger acting strangly happy so Skye would accuse her based off that. Lol. But I guess that random woman helped confirm it.
I love what you did with Jasmine. That was clever. Even I didn't expect that. I'm so used to people swallowing Kenny that I didn't think that she would just hide him in her mouth. Great stuff.
Well, I hear there might be one chapter left. This does feel like a good conclusion coming up, so I can't wait for the next chapter!
I really enjoy reviews like this, whether critical or not, you really broke down this story and I appreciate that!
I was on a fence between adding Jasmine, or having Skye somewhat figure it out? I ultimately chose Jasmine though, since the way I wrote Skye had her too distracted I didn't think it'd be plausible for her to consider Ginger at the time, but looking back I can see how I could have tweaked things. If I had though, Jasmine may have never entered the story, and I'll admit I ALMOST DECIDED TO KILL KENNY. I actually planned on it, but for some reason at the last second I decided to add the twist because I didn't think people would expect it, and ultimately that is my goal as an author of course haha.
There is one chapter left for this particular series, so I can't wait to see your opinion on it! I am contemplating a sequel series though to continue Skye & Kenny's romantic growth etc. I'll be posting a poll on Patreon after I post the 5th chapter for people to vote if they want a sequel series. If they vote for it, then I'll write it. I'll make sure to leave on a cliffhanger lmao
Thanks for reading! :)
Date: July 18 2021 10:09 PM Title: The Strip Club '4'
I'll admit that it had me going. Thought for sure Jasmine was a timid enough person not to cross Ginger, but we get the happy end instead! So glad Kenny's traumatized ass isn't melting away.
I was tempted... But Skye & Kenny are too adorable, I couldn't do it. At least this way, Ginger will believe he is dead and won't bother the two anymore ;)