Date: August 06 2021 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I went to read your story; but the large paragraphs make it hard to read. No doubt you have a good story. Could you please break it into more readable paragraphs, it's hard to follow along as is.
Sorry for the inconvenience. I tried to make the paragraphs more separated, I hope it's now easier to read. In case you still find it difficult to enjoy, you can also read the story here: https://www.deviantart.com/refrt333/art/A-popular-girl-s-rivalry-Part-1-884688500