Date: November 25 2021 4:34 PM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Will you continue this story? I really loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
And I would be on the lookout for an update soon... ;)
Date: November 12 2021 2:32 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Hoping you continue this! Also, hoping you are staying safe and healthy!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am trying my best but we never know what life will throw at us.
In the meantime, I'm glad you still enjoy this story! It will be finished... eventually. Thank you for letting you know; comments like this are useful for gauging interest in these stories.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2021 7:45 PM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Really hoping you continue this!
Author's Response:
Ah! Thank you! I'm certainly plannig on continuing it; just ran into a bit of a creative slump as all. But to be honest, there's never been a better time to be a TTT fan!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2021 6:44 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Man this is a good story. I really like the narritive with the time travel. Kind of hoping they come to more modern times, but the rewritten history books are an excelent detail.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much!
Really love the time travel concept and I wanted to explore a way to gradually begin these girls' apotheosis. It's been fun!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2021 1:29 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Reminds me of a short story I once read. The premise was that travelling in time made you change size.
Because the universe is constantly expanding, if you travelled into the past, you would be big, because space had not yet expanded to the size it was when you had entered the time machine.
Same thing if you travelled into the future, except you had not become that big, thus meaning you were smoll. Good story!
Author's Response:
Ah, I do believe I've read a story using that concept! I considered somewhat more scientific explanations for their growth too, but decided to escew those in preparation for... hopefully... things that will become clear next chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 23 2021 9:50 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Agatha happens to mean "kind, gentle, good" in greek, so if they ever heard her name it would have an influence.
Author's Response:
As it happens, I did not know that! Though that brings to mind that while writing this, I didn't have a perfectly cohesive way to include that Demi's own name is a shortened form of Demeter (and also that's itself a nickname she chose for herself rather than a legal name). I guess this is all just fitting together, huh. Either way, appreciate the info!
[Report This]Date: June 20 2021 8:07 PM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
They need to be careful not to squish a butterfly. Last time I saw someone doing this, it didn't end very well
Author's Response:
Butterflies should be good. Though there are other creatures they may be less merciful in... not squishing. Intentionally at least.
Date: June 20 2021 5:14 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
Great story let's rewrite history can't wait to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Appreciate it! Hope I don't disappoint.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2021 2:53 AM Title: Test-Run - Paleo-America
My kind of history
Author's Response:
Appreciate that! I'm going to try to make the little nods toward real history accurate too, at least until the butterfly effect starts making things indistinguishable from real life.