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Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2022 9:13 PM Title: Climax

Haven't been on the site in a while, glad to see Trials is still getting updated. I really like Susan and I hope that we get to know more about her personality and thoughts. For some reason, knowing what someone is thinking and feeling in these kinds of stories is always the biggest turn on for me. I do hope our little protagonist survives to see the end of this story and gets a happy if severely traumatized ending and he doesn't end up getting lost in Susan forever... Keep 'em coming!



Author's Response:
>Haven't been on the site in a while, glad to see Trials is still getting updated. I really like Susan and I hope that we get to know more about her personality and thoughts.

So happy to see you're still reading! And I'm really glad Susan's been getting so much positive reception! <3

>...knowing what someone is thinking and feeling in these kinds of stories is always the biggest turn on for me.

Yessss! That's a staple of the best erotica I've found throughout my life! I try extensively to communicate that in my writing. At this point, a very large percentage of the time writing is spent making the characters feel true to their feelings, and then describing that in a way that feels fresh and fun :D

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