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Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2022 7:14 PM Title: Momentary Calm

"But you're tiny! [...]What would she make you do?"

And:

"Trim the carpet?"

These two lines seem like some daunting foreshadowing for our protagonist 0.0

Author's Response: How completely inhumane! I'm sure her mother would never do anything of the sort! 😇

Reviewer: Fatal Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2022 11:24 PM Title: Momentary Calm

Like the fact that you manage to keep it smutty even when having story happen. sometimes it feels so forced but you have good balance. i find myself actually interested in the characters lol 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I really try to make the characters have a presence. That's the sexiest thing for me in erotica, engaging characters! Extremely happy it comes across! :D

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