This story is a big reason I started check the site again. Its actually erotica, ya know, the point of this site. there's real writing skill behind this and it shows that you take the time to make it read well. I'm not sure why nobody has mentioned that but it really needs to be said. I'm by no means a great writer but it doesn't take a chef to know when something tastes good.

Author's Response:

Whoa! Thanks so much for the confidence boost! I'm thrilled to know Iyour enjoying it so much! I spend a silly amount of time making everything flow well. I've always really wanted my stories to read like an actual erotica! Can't thank you enough for dropping a review c: