[Report This]Date: November 24 2021 9:15 PM Title: The Jog
Should probably have included a rating =P
Author's Response:
<3
Date: November 24 2021 9:14 PM Title: The Jog
Love reading Lexi's internal monologue, especially the latter bits of Chap.1 and middle of Chap.2 where she discovers and then contemplates the sexual thrill she experiences when dominating his insignificant existence.
Keep up the great work & hope getting a bunch of well-deserved commission requests!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the internal bits, I've received plenty of good responses in regards to that. Often times it's very similar to my own thoughts and fantasies c:
[Report This]Date: June 18 2021 8:02 PM Title: The Jog
Great start. I like the relationship the two have. Lexi developing a fetish as she continues to use Chris. It is an interesting chemisty. The writing style is good. I am trying to impove mine and think of new ways to do things and this looks fun way to do it.
I hope that Lexi either wants to spend a long time with Chris or that Lexi loses track of Chris for a little and he explores other parts of her.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The dynamic between them is of course a big focus for me so I'm happy to be getting positive feedback on that. As for Lexi losing track of him, its pretty likely to happen at some point. She's a bit of a ditz ;)