[Report This]Date: June 28 2021 5:25 PM Title: It's Fine, Mom
Wow... this looks promising as hell! I really LOVE the gentle mom-son scenario, but there are so few of them and most are incomplete. Im really excited about this one! And really loved the foreshadowing about the son "trying to appear as small as possible". Are the tags said and done or do you intend to add more? Asking this because if theres slow shrink and foot stuff in this I would just love it!! But anyway, congrats for this great start, can't wait to read more! Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story, and that you're excited for more. Absolutely, there aren't enough fluffy mom-son stories around here, so I wanted to give it a try. I'll certainly do my best to make it a good one, and to make sure I complete it! I don't imagine it will be *super* long, since the events will take place over a single weekend, but it definitely won't be short, either. I'm also glad you liked that "small as possible" line! Definitely a bit of a reference to what's to come.
As for the tags, I'm certainly open to ideas. I think I'll keep the 'instant size change' part, just for the sake of simplicity, but in terms of other content I'm always happy to hear ideas. As long as it isn't too overtly or deliberately sexual, though, since that isn't a direction I really want to go. I'm fine if things are unintentionally or accidentally sexual, but like my other stories the erotic stuff isn't really my focus. I just want to write about their relationship, if that makes sense. Regardless, thank you again for your thoughts, and I hope you enjoy where we go from here!!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: June 28 2021 3:56 PM Title: It's Fine, Mom
I like this. What Matt suffers from sounds a lot like Depression. Poor little guy needs a heavy dose of TLC, stat!
Looking forward to more. <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it! That's absolutely right, Matt is definitely going through a depressive episode. What I was going for is the idea that things had been getting harder for him for a while, and his bad grade was both the culmination of his pain, and the final straw to where he could no longer keep it in. He's a bit overwhelmed with life, so Sarah definitely needs to figure out how to give him that much needed TLC. Considering the nature of this website, I wonder how she'll do that...?
I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: June 28 2021 1:25 PM Title: The Incident
Nah nah nah. Don't you stop doing what you are doing. This, this right here, thats the rare stuff...the good stuff.
....please dont stop 0_0
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I'll definitely keep going! I'll do my best to update semi-regularly, and I'm seriously happy that you're looking forward to it so much. That always serves as great motivation to keep writing, so I really appreciate your kind words. Thanks again for your reviews, and I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: June 28 2021 11:32 AM Title: It's Fine, Mom
Absolutely fantastic.
I'm not ashamed to admit I teared up a bit myself while reading the second chapter.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story, and that the emotions resonated with you. I'm always honored when I'm able to elicit a tear or two. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: June 14 2021 6:18 AM Title: It's Fine, Mom
Darn it I forgot to give it a rating
Author's Response:
No worries at all, thank you very much for the five stars!
-Pluto
Date: June 14 2021 6:17 AM Title: It's Fine, Mom
Please kind sir, c-can I have some more?
Pretty interresting start with this. Of course as did your other stories. ^_^
I look forward to the next part
Author's Response:
Absolutely, more is on the way! After I finish the next chapter of my other story, which will hopefully(?) be soon. I'm glad you're looking forward to it, and I'm also glad to hear that you've enjoyed my other stories! Thank you so much for the review, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
-Pluto