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Reviewer: Enterobiasis Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2022 2:47 AM Title: A Secret Plan

This is a very good story with some realistic things like FIRST option for her being therapy instead of straight up going to the shrink



But may I ask, when will you update this?

Do you plan on continuing?



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for the extremely late reply, my head has been in a completely different space for a while now and I fell behind on a lot of things. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and finding some aspects of it to be realistic! I definitely thought that therapy was important to bring up here, while also explaining that her desire for a more short-term solution would lead her to the whole shrinking thing. I'll try to keep that up moving forward!

Yes, I definitely intend to continue, and I'm so sorry for the horrible wait. I really don't have an excuse, I just lost all drive and motivation to write for a while. However, a new chapter for this story is next on my agenda, and I'll try to work on it whenever I have free time. Sorry again for the delay, but I hope you'll bear with me as I figure stuff out. Thank you very much for the review, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

-Pluto

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2021 3:52 AM Title: A Secret Plan

Please I need a sequel. It's great



Author's Response:

Don't worry, this story is just getting started! I'll try not to have as long a delay in getting the next chapter out. Until then, thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad you're looking forward to more!

-Pluto

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 6:02 PM Title: A Secret Plan

Waiting was worth it. Your building of the main characters relation, as well as the inner world of Sarah these 3 chapters was nothing short of amazing. I am really invested and enjoied every chapter so far.

As I see it, Sarah, as a young and single mother, is going from one extreme to another, not realizing the changes and dangers her plan can bring to her and her son’s psyche.

The juxtaposition of Sarah’s fears together with her motherly instincts  throughtout chapter 3, even refering to Matt as her “cub”, grant the final part, where she actually concocts her secret plan, a sweet but also erotic and dangerous flavor - something I also felt in her interactions with Matt during the first chapter.

Sarah seems to be (willingly) ignorant about this very subtle side of her “loving adoration” and plans for Matt, but I wouldn’t say it’s the same for him, whom seemed really disturbed by the displays of affection in chapter 1.

I usually like to make theories about what is going to happen next, but I want to wain and see the aftermatch of the shrinking process.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Really good storytelling with amazing characters. Please, continue. I need to know what is going to happen!

 

PS. Sorry for any misspelling. Although I am fluent in english, it is not my primary language.



Author's Response:

Sincerely, thank you so much for the extremely kind review!! I truly appreciate your kind words, and I'm really happy that you're enjoying the buildup of Matt and Sarah's relationship.

You're completely right with your observations of Sarah's behavior so far, and I hope you enjoy finding out how her plan progresses, as well as how it affects Matt. After realizing that she was basically ignoring him, she's now gravitating towards the extreme opposite end of the spectrum - which obviously isn't the best solution. Especially once her son is small, and basically loses his autonomy.

You're also right that she's painfully unaware of how her actions affect others, while Matt is more sensitive to that. I think this will make for an interesting dynamic, and I hope you enjoy how it progresses! I'll try not to have as long a wait for the next chapter. Regardless, thanks again for your review! It means a lot.

-Pluto

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 5:10 PM Title: A Secret Plan

As someone with an unhealthy obsession for this kind of details... 0.04 x 72 = 2.88 means that 2.88 is FOUR % of 72, and 0.005 is 0.5% - one "percent" means one hundredth (in romance languages, "percent" is literally understood to mean something like "per 100").


But since you can't see my face while I'm typing that, let me be explicit: this story is coming out nice and it looks _really_ promising (I wouldn't bother about those tiny things otherwise)



Author's Response:

Thank you very, very much for the review, and for pointing out that error! What happened there was, I had converted the percentage to a decimal in my mind, but still for some reason wrote "percent" after the decimal. Just a little brain-mix-up there, and I just altered the chapter to be more correct. Thanks again, and I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying the story! I hope you enjoy where it goea from here.

-Pluto

Reviewer: sonicguy07 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2021 12:24 PM Title: A Secret Plan

Wow, this chapter was amazing! Definitely worth the wait. I love the focus on Sarah's reaction to the events of last chapter, and how natural it feels. Even her decision to shrink her son manages to feel natural, which isn't too common in these stories. Great job, Pluto.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the extremely kind review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter, and found Sarah's actions natural. This is kind of a silly premise by nature, so being able to pull it off "realistically" is a big relief. Really glad to hear you're enjoying the story, and I'll try not to make you wait so long for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to more of your story as well!

-Pluto

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2021 11:35 AM Title: A Secret Plan

Good story so far!   Keep it up!   Can't wait for more!  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and I hope you enjoy what happens next!

-Pluto

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