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Reviewer: Clay West Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2023 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Isabelle mistakes an identity

Where’s the last chapter?

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 19 2021 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Isabelle mistakes an identity

I don’t feel Brian would place the Shrink Ray down in the open with everything going on but it does add a new twist to the story if Megan gets ahold of it.  If she ends up shrinking Craig down to torture him I’m hoping there is a mention of his sister shrinking inside him even more or if she could even survive that small.  Can’t wait to read the next part.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2021 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Isabelle mistakes an identity

Wow...loving Isabelle. After this chapter I'm really hoping Brian's shrink ray can go in reverse and grow people giant...with her attitude Isabelle would make an amazing giantess at 1000 ft toying with a whole city. And for Brian it would make an amazing movie!

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