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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2021 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Craig's Next Victim

I was looking everyday to see if this story had a new addition.  Even though it took a bit it turned out to be worth the wait.

Loved that Craig’s sister is his victim for this adventure without him knowing.  I’m kind of hoping that his sister is left to her fate when Craig finds out who it is.  Maybe Craig isn’t to fond of his sister for some reason.  Maybe she tortured him as a kid or was the parents favorite and got everything she wanted while he didn’t or he was made to take her everywhere with him by his parents and he never got to do anything fun because of it.

the accidental firing of the shrink ray hitting the dad is gonna be interesting.  Wondering how small he will get.  Doll size, 1-3 inches, 1cm, 1/4 cm, etc.   Will Isabella realize he is there and use him as a toy or will he be unnoticed and nearly killed over and over again.  Maybe he gets caught on her foot and ends up in a bath with her and gets swallowed into the cave of wonders without her realizing.

either way the future chapters go I’m really looking forward to reading them. Thanks for sharing these greats stories.

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