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Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2021 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Hungry Little Sister

So excited Isabel found out about the shrink ray! I also love that she discovered him looking at her bare feet. It would be awesome if rather than just crushing people he shrank his mom and others down so small they had a race across Isabel's upturned sole from her heel to her gigantic toes through wrinkles the size of mountains! Also would be awesome if Isabel eventually used the ray to grow into a real giantess to star in a real giantess movie in the city! Great work!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2021 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A Hungry Little Sister

Great addition.  Can't wait to see what happens with the sister and wether or not he will let her interact with her mom who was not grown back like he said and if the mom could spill the beans about what is going on.  Forcing him to be harsher to his favorite sister.

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