Date: September 30 2021 10:20 PM Title: A Second Chance
While I do love a good gentle muscular amazon, and growth stories, I didn't really enjoy the 'storytelling via texting' part of this story. The ending stuff was pretty good, but I thought the texts just dragged on without any action. It's a good way to explore characters, but I don't feel there was enough payoff to justify that much texting.
But like I said, the ending stuff was still enjoyable. I've also really like the other short stories you've put in this collection. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I felt it worked better with the images that were meant to go with it but I see where you're comming from. It was also a pain to format so I prolly won't be doing many more like that.
Date: September 29 2021 11:30 PM Title: Sibling Shift
I know you just said these are just little bit, but holy shit this was pretty good. Really hoping for a sequel to this chapter.
Author's Response:
I super glad you like it! Many of these stories do have the potential for more chapters or longer adaptations. While I can't make any promises I am sorta using this as an idea backlog for future referance.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2021 2:09 PM Title: Sibling Shift
I really like all of these! Especially the last one, it's just so...kind. <3
Author's Response:
Thanks! Gentle giantessess have always been my speciality.
Date: June 02 2021 6:21 PM Title: Sibling Shift
I really enjoyed these stories. The reality altering types are always fun to read. You should try and turn one into a longer story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked them! Quite a few of these are already longer than I intended them to be. Long form writing really isn't my strong suite but I'll keep the feedback in mind for the future!