Reviews For Haven City
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Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2022 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence

Im just enjoying the story. And I say have fund with a whole scene of them going through theses ideas, maybe even as tour trying to com up with it, imagine the characters having the conversation and what they would come up with, add, or comment on. 

I eagerly await the next chapter!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2022 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence

Ah, so if finally begins. And they have some fresh eyes to help brainstorm ideas. Cant wait to see that whole session snd thier imagining of how various aspects implemented would affect the “disposal” process. 


On diea ti add back to the once in the earlier review, once helpers/constructions giantesses, get involved, shoes and heels that act as carrier for them to then hop out if and into a city. And the appropriate deposal uniform (that has wedge heels imo). But it will be interesting when that part needs working out. 



Author's Response:

Well, I could take the clothing suggestion into consideration. I could see some potential in it, but I need to find and provide context for all that first.

Thanks for the input.

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