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Reviewer: barabba9000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2024 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Love this story, reminds me of micropolis by microtopian, written 10 years ago. Wouldn't it be fun if one of the caretaker was a girl they hate? 



Author's Response:

That's an interesting suggestion, we'll see.


thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Great concept. Love it!

Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

She might also be head disposal officer/specialist or something along those lines, sounds offical, since she is the first and has the most experience. And considering how imortant the feet are, the uniform/toolset that use them has got to be varied, not eveyone will be so good barefoot and might want a more distanced or separated approach via heels wedges of platforms of some varieties. 

 

But like you said, we'll have to wait and see. 

(also I get to give this story two 10 ratings)

Reviewer: Bletch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 17 2021 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

Haven City is those kind of utopias which are actually destined to become a dystopia. I'm quite sure that if shrinking was possible they would do something like this (afterall they've already shown this idea in the movie Downsizing), and I would apply even if I believe:

- the city would be filled with cameras even in homes, to basically work as a big social experiment laboratory (they already did something similiar with rats, they built a rat city to study their behavior)

- those who control the city have sheer power and can do anything they want, while those inside are completely helpess. The owners would be scientists with zero etical issues

- there would be no sexy giantess :(



Author's Response:

Realistically, if shrinking tech do exist, this would be accurate. They would saw the public as mere subject for their research and experiments while giving full control to the owners.

 

No sexy giantess, this reality hurts deep in my soul :(

Reviewer: Tinymanunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity

This has potential to be so good! Maybe the two end up outside the dome, trapped between her toes, her unaware of it? 



Author's Response:

Anything could happen!

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