[Report This]Date: April 03 2024 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Harsh Truth
Great to see this continue and welcome back!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! this is the longest chapter yet I didn't even realize it, maybe that's why it took a long time to make -_-'
Also, many new ideas that led to some changes from my initial plan.
Date: January 18 2024 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
Love this story, reminds me of micropolis by microtopian, written 10 years ago. Wouldn't it be fun if one of the caretaker was a girl they hate?
Author's Response:
That's an interesting suggestion, we'll see.
thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2024 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 10: Otherside
YAY! YOUR BACK!!
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long, thank you for your patience!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2022 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence
Im just enjoying the story. And I say have fund with a whole scene of them going through theses ideas, maybe even as tour trying to com up with it, imagine the characters having the conversation and what they would come up with, add, or comment on.
I eagerly await the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 07 2022 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Innocence
Ah, so if finally begins. And they have some fresh eyes to help brainstorm ideas. Cant wait to see that whole session snd thier imagining of how various aspects implemented would affect the “disposal” process.
On diea ti add back to the once in the earlier review, once helpers/constructions giantesses, get involved, shoes and heels that act as carrier for them to then hop out if and into a city. And the appropriate deposal uniform (that has wedge heels imo). But it will be interesting when that part needs working out.
Author's Response:
Well, I could take the clothing suggestion into consideration. I could see some potential in it, but I need to find and provide context for all that first.
Thanks for the input.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2022 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
Another good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks again!
Date: April 22 2022 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
Great concept. Love it!
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 7: Without Any Trace
Another great chapter!
And good to see you back!
Author's Response:
Many thanks! Hopefully I could continue this one.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2021 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
She might also be head disposal officer/specialist or something along those lines, sounds offical, since she is the first and has the most experience. And considering how imortant the feet are, the uniform/toolset that use them has got to be varied, not eveyone will be so good barefoot and might want a more distanced or separated approach via heels wedges of platforms of some varieties.
But like you said, we'll have to wait and see.
(also I get to give this story two 10 ratings)
[Report This]Date: June 14 2021 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6: First to Fall
Another good chapter.
Considering the rate at which thes disposals are happening, the company might need to formalise the process and have a little training for it, if only to make it profeinal since it is a corporat environment. Means also figuring out the toolset, uniform, terminology etc. And Jenny is in prime position to come up with is all.
Author's Response:
Maybe when the feeling of control and power finally caught up to them, yeah, it's possible.
That's an interesting suggestion, thanks. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2021 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Long Night
I like the way things are developing between the different perspectives. Also, I like how more interaction is possible through the tech available
[Report This]Date: May 17 2021 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
Haven City is those kind of utopias which are actually destined to become a dystopia. I'm quite sure that if shrinking was possible they would do something like this (afterall they've already shown this idea in the movie Downsizing), and I would apply even if I believe:
- the city would be filled with cameras even in homes, to basically work as a big social experiment laboratory (they already did something similiar with rats, they built a rat city to study their behavior)
- those who control the city have sheer power and can do anything they want, while those inside are completely helpess. The owners would be scientists with zero etical issues
- there would be no sexy giantess :(
Author's Response:
Realistically, if shrinking tech do exist, this would be accurate. They would saw the public as mere subject for their research and experiments while giving full control to the owners.
No sexy giantess, this reality hurts deep in my soul :(
Date: May 12 2021 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: Brilliant Invention
Really like the opening so far. Can't wait to see what what jenny does with her tiny city
Date: May 10 2021 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Opportunity
This has potential to be so good! Maybe the two end up outside the dome, trapped between her toes, her unaware of it?
Author's Response:
Anything could happen!