Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2021 4:40 AM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Just as good -- if not better -- as it's ever been.

I'm wondering if Ran will develop a control over her bodily functions. I can totally see her willing herself to, say, go into hibernation for as long as she desires if she so chooses. Something about a giantess deciding to go to sleep, becoming a fixture in the environment for an indeterminate amount of time, is quite attractive to me. But I somehow sense she has more "active" plans for the planet.

Author's Response:

It's obviously ambuiguous, but I think it's fair to say that by now we realize she's not beholden to such things anymore. Only infinite growth is what matters XD Let's see what she has in mind during day 18.

As for a sleeping giantess... that's for another story :P

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2021 6:04 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Absolutely fantastic, and quickly becoming one of my favorites. I cannot wait for her to grow into the giga range and beyond.

You have a real talent for writing -- and your improvement over the original text is noticable. Improving as a writer is not easy, you should be very proud. I can't wait to read what you come up with next :)

Author's Response:

You shouldn't have to wait too long. We're getting there -exponentially- fast. And thanks for the improvement comments. Most of my improvements really come from taking more time to re-read and re-write things. xoxo

Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2021 2:25 AM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Loving this so far. It's feeling a lot more... existentially tense. Knowing how the story went down originally and seeing the many small changes is filling me with both dread and excitement.

Author's Response:

It's probably feeling more tense because of the added details and length. But for sure our doctor and the patient both know that something's coming. Original story went to day 14, I'm estimating this to go to day 21 or close to that. Some events have been moved around too compared to the original (since the curve of growth is slightly different).

Reviewer: saitamaok Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2021 8:40 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

I was a big fan of the original, so when I saw on your DeviantArt page that you were you redoing it, I got super excited. I'm looking forward to how this redux ends!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you were able to find it here easily. Updating it this way over there would have been hell, so it'll be done differently for DA. As for the end of the redux, it'll be quite similar, except "bigger" :grin: (and more detailed of course)

Enjoy :)