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Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2021 7:22 PM Title: 18th of May, 20XX, 08:30 & 12:51 & 23:38

You did a great job getting across how unbelieavbly massive she is becoming. Body exploration at such sizes is always fun. I hope she interacts with the doctor one more time.



Author's Response:

Due to the speed of her growth, the exploration became limited, certainly. I do eventually want to make a story that leaves more room for it. The part where the doctor runs from her breasts all the way down to her crotch was quite fun to write. I will have to think about this. Enjoy the last parts I just added :)

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2021 11:45 PM Title: 18th of May, 20XX, 08:30 & 12:51 & 23:38

Amazing story! Now that they're on her foot...I'd love if they could explore her ever-expanding soles hiking the wrinkles like mountains and valleys.  When she gets big enough it would be awesome if she could enjoy herself like she just did...but this time soaking a whole country.  Maybe a navy or cruise ships could try sailing through the oceans she would create...  Great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the word :) As for the seaside adventure: there are always more tera-sized girls waiting in the shadows. A thought for future stories ;)

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2021 9:10 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

This chapter was pretty incredible! Ran has exceeded expectations as a mega giantess.



Author's Response:

She's exponentially exceeding expectations. Models and predictions can't keep up!

Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2021 4:40 AM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Just as good -- if not better -- as it's ever been.

I'm wondering if Ran will develop a control over her bodily functions. I can totally see her willing herself to, say, go into hibernation for as long as she desires if she so chooses. Something about a giantess deciding to go to sleep, becoming a fixture in the environment for an indeterminate amount of time, is quite attractive to me. But I somehow sense she has more "active" plans for the planet.



Author's Response:

It's obviously ambuiguous, but I think it's fair to say that by now we realize she's not beholden to such things anymore. Only infinite growth is what matters XD Let's see what she has in mind during day 18.

As for a sleeping giantess... that's for another story :P

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2021 11:45 PM Title: The Final Days // 17th of May, 20XX, 09:13 & 13:32 & 19:48

YES.

So happy to see another chapter. I can't wait to read it. 

Looks like I forgot to leave a star rating last time. Wanted to make sure I fixed that ASAP!



Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back for the rating btw ^-^

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 11:01 PM Title: 16th of May, 20XX, 14:07, Provincial capital

Hey, really hope the next part is coming out soon. This is a masterpiece. I will be subscribing to your Patreon once payday rolls around :)



Author's Response:

It should! I'm 2/3 through writing day 17, so far it's around 9 pages just that day. Thanks a lot in any case for considering to subscribe, even if it is just for a little while. Every little bit helps :)

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2021 2:33 AM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Just wanted to say that I'm really looking forward to the finale whenever it's ready :D



Author's Response:

Thank you. It's coming as soon as I can. Just been really busy with a "once in a lifetime even" but I should be done with that after next week.

Reviewer: stegosaurus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2021 6:04 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Absolutely fantastic, and quickly becoming one of my favorites. I cannot wait for her to grow into the giga range and beyond.

You have a real talent for writing -- and your improvement over the original text is noticable. Improving as a writer is not easy, you should be very proud. I can't wait to read what you come up with next :)



Author's Response:

You shouldn't have to wait too long. We're getting there -exponentially- fast. And thanks for the improvement comments. Most of my improvements really come from taking more time to re-read and re-write things. xoxo

Reviewer: Somewhereinthenight Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2021 10:58 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

I am a huge fan of this story!! Seems like Ran has figured out her new role in society rather quickly ;) excited to see what's in store as she grows even larger.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I'm sure her followers helped inflate her ego somehow, but that's out of the scope of what our good doctor perceives... for now.

Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2021 11:42 PM Title: 13th of May, 20XX, 16:32, Ruins of L. Town

The lack of an unaware tag, and the contents of this chapter, give me hope that extreme-size difference interactions are in store in future chapters. This is very rare in western size-fetish fiction.

 

Often western writers assume that someone big would have the same number of cones in their eye, thus making it so their ability to perceive objects would be the same as a normal sized human, but if their eyes have many, many cones adapted to function properly, then they would actually be able to percieve far more than the average person; it's been said that if we had a vast enough 'eye' in outer space, we would be able to see all the light from a star and actually watch its past events like you would a movie. Furthermore, much of what we believe we perceive is our brains taking a ton of data received from the body and constructing the objects we see, hear, and feel in our minds based on what the brain automatically determines as relevant or important. So, I'm hoping Ran ascends into a goddess that has the capacity to interpret and feel her followers and focus on whichever ones she's most interested in. One of my fetishes is a huge girl trying to find a teeny-tiny person.

 

In any case, I'll be looking forward to whatever you actually have in mind for the future chapters; I'm under the assumption you've already written everything so you can drip-feed it here without any delays. Keep up the good work~.



Author's Response:

I love this idea. Altough not what I had in mind for this one, it's definitely something I could use as a pseudo reason for enhance perception. I really like making my stories suspend disbelief as much as possible, and that could be one other way. I'm curious: when you have this idea of a large girl trying to find a microscopic person, do you envision from the giant's point of view or the tiny? Both would make for a much different perspective. I also checked your profile out, and I really like the idea of the smaller party being more in charge of the situation. It's a fun contrast. If you want you can send me a response here or through my other accounts (deviantart, patreon, twitter, giantesscity forums). Thank you so much in any case for the comment. 


"I'm under the assumption you've already written everything so you can drip-feed it here without any delays. Keep up the good work~."

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Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2021 2:25 AM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

Loving this so far. It's feeling a lot more... existentially tense. Knowing how the story went down originally and seeing the many small changes is filling me with both dread and excitement.



Author's Response:

It's probably feeling more tense because of the added details and length. But for sure our doctor and the patient both know that something's coming. Original story went to day 14, I'm estimating this to go to day 21 or close to that. Some events have been moved around too compared to the original (since the curve of growth is slightly different).

Reviewer: saitamaok Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2021 8:40 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

I was a big fan of the original, so when I saw on your DeviantArt page that you were you redoing it, I got super excited. I'm looking forward to how this redux ends!

Reviewer: saitamaok Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2021 8:40 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

I was a big fan of the original, so when I saw on your DeviantArt page that you were you redoing it, I got super excited. I'm looking forward to how this redux ends!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you were able to find it here easily. Updating it this way over there would have been hell, so it'll be done differently for DA. As for the end of the redux, it'll be quite similar, except "bigger" :grin: (and more detailed of course)

Enjoy :)

Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2021 8:06 PM Title: 3rd of May, 20XX, 18:53, Outskirts of L. town

I saw this posted and got really excited. The original is one of my favorite stories on this site. I personally never would've come up with the idea of reworking it -- why improve on perfection, after all? -- but this new story somehow managed to do so excellently so far. My only gripe is now I have to wait more days for the rest of the revamped story.



Author's Response:

<3 xoxo

Strap in for the ride boys!!! Haha.

Thank you so much for the praise. I hope to be deserving.

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